Critique

barb_er : and i must say - nice one on your latest blog. very modern writing style
El Perrito : esque?
barb_er : yups
El Perrito : it was really just a long winded method....
El Perrito : ....of getting to compare gf number 1 to yeast
El Perrito : :))
barb_er : very chic lit actually
El Perrito : well.... not really. i'd been frustrated reading neil gaiman
El Perrito : i don't think i'm cut out for short stories much as i love them
El Perrito : the title esque is supposed to reflect on authors
barb_er : but u can read that book.. the book that i could not read..
barb_er : by that travel author
El Perrito : as in neil gaiman-esque
El Perrito : harlan ellison-esque
El Perrito : though naming those two are just examples. in no way am i making any comparisons or attempting to emulate them.
barb_er : ok.. ok.. point noted and taken
El Perrito : crappalike dat
El Perrito : but it has something not usual in a short story
El Perrito : positive hope at the end
barb_er : :))
El Perrito : :D
El Perrito : and of course this is the way my english tuition teacher would have loved for me to write back then!
barb_er : oh yeah.. too-ee-syun
El Perrito : but i'm glad you liked it. it's a good indicator
barb_er : it is? of?
El Perrito : readability
barb_er : from me? you gotta be kidding
El Perrito : i am?
barb_er : okay. you're not.